Reviews: Number 2 · 9:46pm Oct 20th, 2015
Here's my list of reviews, a couple days late...sorry...
Also, spoilers ahead!
Sleeping Your Way to the Top
Well, what was there NOT to like about this? It was really funny, and not taken too seriously. It also felt kinda dragged, though, and I didn't think Candace was in very good character, speaking of witch, I found the rest to be a little exaggerated, but it was easy to ignore, and I hope to see a sequel!
I give it eight out of ten stars: recommended!
Chase Me
I don't get to read clopfics very often because I live with my strict parents (though that will change soon) and I thought this story was pretty good! The clop was very sexy and it's a fetish that I think should be explored more. also I thought that ending was sweet!
I give it six out of ten stars: if you have free time, give it a read!
Detective On The Case!
I love mystery stories...if their done well. I felt like this story focuses more on the comedy than the actual mystery. I think it should be 50/50. Not only that but Berrys and Detective are very similar in personality, witch makes it alot harder to see them develop over their differences. I'd still like to see where this story goes, keep up the good work you two!
I give it five out of ten stars: meh...
Oh, you are very welcome!
3505546 Alright looking forward to it