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Infernity Zero


I'm Zero. I'm an author-in-training who's using this site as a way to improve his potential. My favorite characters are Rarity, Sunset, and Zecora.

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  • 71 weeks
    Farewell Everyone

    So this should come as a surprise to absolutely no one. But now that To Save a Life is complete, I'm leaving Fimfiction. The truth of the matter is that I've simply lost my passion for fanfiction in general now that I've started writing my own original content. It just doesn't compare. I still love the show, and I'll probably pop in from time to time, but my fanfic writing days are over. I regret

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  • 128 weeks
    One Important Question

    If I only manage to finish one story with my new full-time schedule and high list of priorities, which one should it be? From a Shimmer to a Shine or To Save a Life? And why?

    0 comments · 167 views
  • 199 weeks
    Whyyyyyy

    I feel so guilty right now. People keep favoriting my stories when I can barely have time to write them now that I have a full-time job. But at the same time, I haven't gotten disinterested in FiM or Equestria Girls either. So I can't officially declare myself dead either. I still pop in from time to time.

    0 comments · 173 views
  • 251 weeks
    Where is He Now?

    I just realized that looking back on these old blogs and author's notes that they basically represent snapshots of my life. From community college, to regular college, all the way to grad school. Such is life.

    0 comments · 276 views
  • 267 weeks
    From one Blog to Another

    So in the meantime, I've started another official blog; and now that it has a few posts under its belt, I thought I'd share it with you.

    https://jedwards1293.wixsite.com/writing

    0 comments · 221 views
Oct
11th
2015

Zero Blogs: Dusk Shine part 2 · 9:08pm Oct 11th, 2015

This is harder than I thought. Mainly because I'm not sure what the old Dusk didn't have that the new Dusk needs. Yes, it was rushed, and some parts could have been elaborated upon, but I can't get a good idea of what's actually lacking. The first chapter needs to establish Sunset's regret, the student's hatred of her, and her relationship with Celestia. All of these aspects were present in the original, but I'm having a hard time figuring how to elaborate on them.

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Comments ( 3 )

I'm all for elaborating different parts, but if you can't find any way too do so, then you might just need to rewrite the chapter sperate from the published version.

That way a chapter isn't missing from the published story and you aren't feeling compelled to get this done quickly.

That's my opinion.

3462647 I can't do that, Plushy. That would be the easy way out. A sign that I'm not confident enough in my own ability to improve. You'll recall that when I did my earlier revisions, I unpublished them as well until I was finished. Dusk is no different. If moving my writing up to the next level means working under pressure, then I at least have to try.

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Well, I admire your ambition and perseverance. Lemme know if I can help in anyway.

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