Need Help: RD And Shipping · 9:04am Oct 2nd, 2015
You like Rainbow Dash?
You like shipping?
Well, it's not here yet. Because I need a damn good editor. Offer me up with more ideas because:
1. I ain't reaching the 1000 limit.
2. The descriptions are anything but well-written.
3. I feel like there could be more but I am plum out of ideas.
4. How to romance?
5. How to comedy?
Try describing the scenery.... the background. Make me feel as though i'm there. For example, how the cool breeze, no matter how faint, that rustled her mane lightly.
And if you want Romance..... tell exactly how each character feels about one another. Start off with light notes of affection, like a caress of the mane, or a soft word or words of encouragement...... maybe a heated firery kiss. Does this help?