Stories · 7:51pm Oct 1st, 2015
Thinking of making a new story, in the break between Candy chapters(yes one is coming) and pondering how to continue Every Time I See Her.
An HIE story, to be precise.
Goodbye, you! And you! And yo- oh wait, that guy stayed. Cool.
But yeah. Tossin' some ideas about.
If any of you have any suggestions, tips, or tricks on how to write an HIE properly, please throw them directly into my face.
~TOOWC
-ahem- should probably do a complete overhaul on Every Time I See Her....trust me. just scrap it and start over.
3434782 I would.
I reaaally would.
But I can't. Both for the fact that I've nowhere to really take it, an' I don't want to just delete it, and that it's here to serve a bit of memory to Sir Hat. I still like that guy.
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yeah I know Hat...I used to be friends with the guy.
but after seeing some rather unstable personality traits, I Distanced myself from him.
Every Time I See Her was one of the story's I helped him come up with.
The way he wrote it is.....hilariously broken, so you'd be doing him a favor by scraping it and starting over.
and maybe remove the fucking anthro because when I pitched the original idea to him I explicitly said no anthro *angry noises*
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Could you tell me what the plot of the story is/was?
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like what the original plot I pitched to him was?
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Yeah. Maybe in a PM or somesuch. It would really help with continuing/restarting it.