Cheese and Cats and cheese (CONTAINS SPOILERS!!!!) · 1:38pm Jan 19th, 2012
Guess what, I got bored. So I wrote a part of "Hearts of Ice and Souls of Fire" out, just for those of you that read these posts.
This is part of the story from later on, and, although it will reveal some story line, it's not a super-huge spoiler.
Anyway, enough talk, time to read!
Start excerpt here:
Pip reached his hoof out in front of him, trembling. The statue looked real, almost life-like. Pinkie stood tall, rearing back on her hindlegs in what could only be described as fear. Her once bubbly face now etched with fright, she screamed silently, indefinitely. Behind him, Pip could hear the quiet sobs of Applebloom as she grieved, knowing full well what had happened.
Pip’s hoof stretched further out in front of him, growing ever-closer to Pinkie’s dormant form. At last, it made contact, and a small clunk resonated around the forest. The statue rocked slowly back and forth, as if precariously balanced on the edge of a cliff. A small crack began to form where Pip’s hoof had touched Pinkie. The crack grew, growing larger and more widespread as it made it’s way around her body. Dust began to pour from the inside, swirling in clouds and clumps as it streamed out. A loud cracking noise escaped from the statue, causing Pip to leap backwards in fright.
Stone crumbled and fell, smashing into the ground with dull thumps as it crumbled. Pinkie’s statue fell, crumpling beneath it’s own weight. A large cloud of dust sprang up around the remains, swirling and dancing in the light cast by the fireflies. The last of Pinkie’s statue faded away, leaving behind only a small rock.
“P-Pip, what did you do?” Applebloom asked, making her way towards the remains.
“I...”
“What did you do?!” Applebloom swung around to face him, her eyes blazing. She pawed at the ground, her right hoof striking it once, then twice.
“I-I didn’t mean... It wasn’t my-”
“Save it,” Applebloom growled, lowering her head. Pipsqueak took a step back, his eyes opening wide with fright.
“Applebloom, please,” he whispered, stepping backwards yet again. Applebloom charged, her hooves kicking up clouds of dust as she sprinted head first towards where Pip stood. Something pink blurred by, knocking Applebloom off- course.
“Wha?” she managed to stutter. before being knocked again by the pink streak.
“Stop it, true friends don’t fight,” an energetic voice exclaimed. “They give each other presents and hugs. Ooh, and sweets. Hey do you have any sweets? ‘Cos I could really do with some sweets right now.”
“Pinkie!”
End excerpt
Soooo, what do you guys think? Is my writng up to it's usual standard, or is it sub-par compared? Don't be shy, leave a comment.
Anyway, seeya later!
Huh, I guess nobody reads these. Oh well!