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War. War never changes. Unless we're talking the space of a hundred years or so, rockets and guns probably outclass spears and arrows in some way. Hmm... I'll get back to you on this. Eventually.

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  • 420 weeks
    (CI) It Happened!

    I made it onto the bottom of the featured list for 10 minutes! :pinkiehappy:

    Seriously, thank you ALL so much for this! It's so great to know that I can actually get somewhere with all this!

    On a side note, I would love an editor for a new project I'm working on. It's a comedy, so if you're good with comedy, flow, pacing and dialogue, and know anything about fascist dictators, send me a PM!

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  • 430 weeks
    (CI) Chapter 27... I don't like it

    I don't like how it went, but I'm already a long way through Chapter 28 to make up for it, a much longer chapter filled with wayyy more action.

    See ya soon! :pinkiehappy:

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    (CI) Chapter 25 Progress

    I think it's finally done. This one took some smashing of writer's block to get done, but damn it, it's done!

    Also, thanks a million for 100 likes! I think Chapter 25 might break me into the featured box with a little luck!

    Have a good day/night! :pinkiehappy:

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  • 453 weeks
    (CI) Preview!

    It's finally past raw writing! 6,600 words of pure tears, sweat, and phone-writing later, I'm proud to give you guys a taste of the new chapter!



    The night had fallen cold and silent. No clouds obscured the bright moon and her stars, but a brisk breeze blew across the ocean, only stopped by the cliffs facing the waves.

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  • 453 weeks
    (CI) The Battle of Las Pegasus

    Already 4,000 words in, ladies and gentlemen! This is shaping up to be the largest chapter by far. Hopefully I can get it done somewhat soon.

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2015

(CI) Preview! · 1:33am Sep 23rd, 2015

It's finally past raw writing! 6,600 words of pure tears, sweat, and phone-writing later, I'm proud to give you guys a taste of the new chapter!



The night had fallen cold and silent. No clouds obscured the bright moon and her stars, but a brisk breeze blew across the ocean, only stopped by the cliffs facing the waves.

“Was this how your ancestors felt crossing the Delaware?” Ricky asked a chattering Jeremiah, grinning.

“Well, then it was the thick of winter. It definitely ain’t that here,” Jeremiah explained.

“Hopefully we can at least pin down the ‘flawless victory’ part of it down, eh?” Ricky turned around, to face the rest of his rowboat. “Right, boys?!”

A quiet cheer greeted him, across all the rowboats of his miniature flotilla. About twenty boats had been built in the couple of hours they had had before dark arrived. Now, these untested vessels were on their maiden voyage, carrying a strike force across the choppy bay and into Las Pegasus’ dock.

At least, that was the plan that Ricky had devised.

Right now, Ricky and the others weren’t feeling important, they were feeling numb. His leather rifle strap was chilling his shoulder slowly. “When this is all over, we’ll warm ourselves with the ponies’ still-warm fireplaces! Maybe take a swig of their unfinished brew!” The men perked up at the promise of a warm fire after the battle. The rowboats began to move a little faster.

The boats had to come out of the mouth of the river, and hug the side of the cliff to avoid being taken out by the current, but now they were in the final stretch of open water before the dock.

Las Pegasus itself was still quite awake, most of the city’s windows still glowing with light. None of the buildings were skyscraper tall, but most were at least a few stories. Only near the outskirts could Ricky just make out the faint lights of one-window houses.

‘Looks like Celestia’s prosperous kingdom isn’t as equal and happy as she might think it is,’ Ricky thought amusedly.

He quickly stopped his mental course as he snapped back to the fact that the edge of the dock was now being passed by his lead rowboat.

They had an, albeit tentative, foothold inside Las Pegasus.

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