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Onyx Star


Just a brony that likes to write

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  • 451 weeks
    Chapter 2: Turn Your Head And Cough

    Chapter 2 is finally out and our friendly neighborhood Brigand meets some interesting ponies and gets a little more than he bargained for.

    As always if you spot something wrong with it speak up so I can correct it.

    Chapter 3: A Dish Best Served Cold is also now being written up and should be expected hopefully sometime next week.

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  • 451 weeks
    My partner in crime

    I think it's time to introduce my partner in crime InkSlinger. Our two current fics take place in the same universe both have been a collaborative effort, he's had a large impact on my fic and I've influenced his. We've been working up to a much larger fic later down the road, but do be sure to check out his fic

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  • 452 weeks
    Updated Two Birds of a Feather

    I decided to go back to chapter 1 of Two Birds of a Feather before moving onto chapter 2, I gave the summary an overhaul and did a bit of surgery on the chapter as a whole, adding some things while removing others.

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Sep
23rd
2015

Updated Two Birds of a Feather · 12:25am Sep 23rd, 2015

I decided to go back to chapter 1 of Two Birds of a Feather before moving onto chapter 2, I gave the summary an overhaul and did a bit of surgery on the chapter as a whole, adding some things while removing others.

This fic is more of a preface to a bigger story which is currently in the works, this story is more to introduce a lot of the characters and the world they're living in so if the writing style is slow to manifest its self it's because I'm easing into it.

Moreover, critique is also welcome, or any kinda feedback really, if you want to say it's garbage or a load of horseapples then by all means, just have a some sort of justification so that I'm not left wondering what went wrong.

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