Did I write the Celestial Sisters wrong?

Fans of AKG, please let me know. I am genuinely curious.

The reason I worry about this is because the driving force for their character, throughout the entire fic, was... rather basic. I took two female characters and I made their entire motivation, however indirectly, be about a man.I boiled Luna's complex personality down to "Daddy Issues" and I Celestia barely got any screen time.

And spoilers. In IHTB, they're both dead. p it's not getting fixed there.

So did I screw Celestia and Luna over?

Comments

[VampDash]

..... sorta. I mean it's been pretty much stated they're immortal, if they can survive a thousand years then old age isn't a problem, and their issues with Glare were rather.... one dimensional even though they were true. I felt you maybe could've made it more.... of an abusive relationship so that Glare is one minute harping and beating on them but the next minute he's comforting them and allowing them feel saftey and comfort while in the arms of the psychopath. His return could've had more impact due to this with Luna nearly blacking out from seeing HIM again and Celestia throws all logic out the door as she tries repeatedly to destroy him with her sun beams, yes I call her spell lasers sun beams sue me.