Revising some chapters. · 10:21pm Sep 10th, 2015
Originally, the first three chapters were meant to by one. However, I was so naive and eager, that I didn't realize how lackluster they were divided. Some have said that there just wasn't enough substance to really hook them. So, I did what I wanted to do from the start. Chapters 1-3 are now a good 9k chapter. I think this might help hook some new readers, but I don't know yet. Let me know what you think if you have an opinion of the matter.
And I guess I could do a quick update on the next the chapter since I'm here... It's meh. The next chapter is written out, but half of it is in my laptop and the other half is in a notebook. I've been meeting to get around to transferring it over, but I just... keep... procrastinating. When I'm not scrambling to go to work or fighting the urge to commit suicide because school has me by the balls, most of my energy is devoted to continue further writing, not fleshing out what I have already. Should get around to it pretty soon though.