From many complaints.

Thanks to the red tape and death threats, I have managed to drag my lazy ass out from under a rock and edit a few chapters. I am NO author, only a Roleplayer, and for the final time. I write in the fashion I RP, it isnt for everyone...clearly. Still hope its worth enough for every pony to stop sending me the picture of the Brony pouring bleach into his eyes in regards to my work, lol.

And no, I do not know a Editor, do you?!