Have the rest, on me.

This is the rest of chapter 1 of that webcomic I keep jabbering about. I haven't been getting any artist submissions, and I hate leaving stories untold, so here....

Page 9

Panel 1
Three teams of Enemy pegasi, each team carrying a huge crate thing. There are a few pegasi not carrying. They are escorts.

Panel 2
Rarity whips her head around.

Rarity:
Contact South!

Panel 3
Spitfire looks up.

Panel 4
One of the escort pegasi, readying a rpg.

Page 10

Panel 1
Spitfire dragging one of the civilians bodyguard style.

Spitfire:
INCOMING!

Panel 2
The rocket exploding.

Panel 3
Rarity getting knocked down by the blast.

Panel 4
The Enemy setting the crates down.

Page 11

Panel 1
The crates open

Panel 2
Non-flying Enemy start pouring out, guns blazing.

Panel 3
Spitfire drawing a pistol

Spitfire:
Protect the civilians!

Panel 4
A friendly unicorn MP gets shot, with Rarity on the ground in the fore of the panel.

Panel 5
His rifle lands in front of Rarity.

Page 12

Panel 1
Camera behind Rarity as she telekinetically picks up the gun.

Panel 2
She turns partially around to look at Fancy and Fleur. They're just getting up. Rarity's on the left. Her face is unsure.

Rarity:
C-come on. I have to get you off the parade grounds. Away from here.

Panel 3
Fancy and Fleur nodding. Fleur's on the left.

Fancy Pants:
We're right behind you.

Panel 4
Camera behind the three as they set off. From left to right it's Fancy, Rarity(leading them), and Fleur.

Page 13

Panel 1
A shot of the battle. A few of the good guys are leading civilians away, but most are holding their ground against the invaders.

Panel 2
Twilight lands in front of a big group of VIPs

Panel 3
Spitfire and another soldier approach her. Twilight is on the left side, only half visible.

Spitfire:
Your Highness, we have to get you out of here!

Panel 4
Spitfire and the other soldier, Spitfire reacting to the pony getting shot. The bullet passed just over her.

Spitfire:
Damn it!

Page 14

Panel 1
Twilight addressing Spitfire. Camera has shifted so that Spitfire is on the left.

Twilight:
Not before every civilian is clear.

Spitfire:
Your-

Twilight:
I'll put a shield around us. That way, your troops can safely extract them in an orderly manner.

Panel 2
Spitfire

Spitfire:
Are you sure?

Twilight(off-screen):
Yes

Panel 3
Spitfire

Panel 4
Spitfire stoops to pick up the dead pony's rifle.

Spitfire:
Fine.

Panel 5
Spitfire, holding the gun, shouting commands.

Spitfire:
Dig in here! Start pulling the civilians out, teams of two!

Page 15

Panel 1
Spitfire notices Rarity leading Fancy and Fleur away. Only Spitfire's face is visible on the left of the panel and the others are in the distance.

Panel 2
Rarity leading Fancy and Fleur.

Panel 3
They all take cover against a wall

Rarity:
Hold on.

Panel 4
Rarity's face, peeking around the corner.

Page 16

Panel 1
An Enemy, looking away from where Rarity's head is poking out. He is distinctive-looking.

Panel 2
Rarity looking back at Fancy and Fleur. She is motioning for them to be quiet.

Panel 3
Same set up, but Rarity is now gesturing for the others to cross.

Panel 4
Fleur and Fancy move, with Rarity providing cover.

Page 17

Panel 1
Rarity up close, looking down the sight of her gun.

Panel 2
She lowers the rifle. She just can't do it.

Panel 3
She catches up to Fancy and Fleur.

Panel 4
They reach an open space, but Rarity holds the other two back.

Rarity:
Hold on, you two. Wouldn't want to get shot.

Panel 5
The entrance to the main building. It has been secured, and there are a few soldiers behind barricades. They are defending the entrance.

Page 18

Panel 1
Both groups, with Rarity's on the left.

Rarity:
Zebra!

Panel 2
The soldiers take notice.

Lead Soldier:
Griffon!

Panel 3
Rarity herding Fancy and Fleur in front of her. Lead Soldier is visible on the right.

Rarity:
Civilians.

Lead Soldier:
We got 'em.

Panel 4
Rarity talking with the Lead Soldier. Fancy and Fleur are being led into the building behind them.

Rarity:
Has the Princess made it back yet?

Lead Soldier:
Negative. According to the VIPs, she's holding a shield at the battle. Won't leave until everypony's safe.

Page 19

Panel 1
Rarity looks back towards the battle, biting her lip.

Rarity:
Twilight...

Panel 2
She raises her gun. Lead Soldier is visible.

Rarity:
Keep them safe.

Panel 3
She starts running towards the battle

Panel 4
The defenders.

Soldier #2:
Who was that? Did she just get assigned here?

Soldier #3:
Celestia's mercy, she was pretty.

Soldier #4:
Jeez...

Panel 5
Lead Soldier turns to his team.

Lead Soldier:
Hey! She is a soldier and you will respect her. Now focus!

Soldiers #2, 3, and 4:
Yes sir.

Panel 6
Lead Soldier looking down, muttering to himself.

Lead Soldier:
Oh, if only she wasn't...

Page 20

Panel 1
Back at the battle field. Two soldiers are leading the final VIPs away. Spitfire is looking at Twilight.

Spitfire:
That's the last of them!

Panel 2
A soldier at the barricade gets hit in the shoulder

Panel 3
Twilight puts a magical bandage on him.

Twilight:
THAT'S IT!

Panel 4
Twilight hops the barricade. Spitfire is visible.

Spitfire:
Princess, no!

Panel 5
High angle shot of Twilight entering Avatar state. Some of the Enemy are visible.

Page 21

Panel 1
A wave of purple energy engulfs the ground Enemy.

Panel 2
Enemy Pegasi dive at her from behind

Panel 3
Magical nets scoop them up.

Panel 4
They're deposited in a bubble with the ground forces,

Panel 5
Twilight by the bubble, addressing the Enemy.

Twilight:
Your guns won't work in that bubble. It's over.

Page 22

Panel 1
The Enemy that Rarity spared wasn't captured. He takes aim.

Panel 2
Low angle of Rarity arriving

Panel 3
Rarity sees the Enemy aiming at Twailight. Camera is behind Rarity. Twilight's on her left and the Enemy's on her right.

Rarity:
Twilight!

Panel 4
Rarity shoots without thinking.

Panel 5
The shot hits the Enemy in the neck.

Page 23

Panel 1
Spitfire and Twilight turn towards the sound of the gun

Spitfire:
Wha-

Panel 2
They both see Rarity, her gun still pointed at the dead Enemy. Camera is between their faces.

Panel 3
Rarity lowers her gun, the realization that she's taken a life hitting her.

Panel 4
High angle of Rarity, tears begining to stream.

Rarity:
Yes, i'm the type of pony everypony should know...