Hm...

Greetings. For the past two or three days, I've managed to get the idea of a story on my mind. My question isn't if it'd be good or not, though if it actually is believable.

Now, let's say, we follow a old pony. Follow them for a while to learn about them. Maybe just a daily routine or something.

So as the story progress, they'll get sicker and sicker, in this case probably due to their age. They'll get put into a hospital to maybe be saved for another year, but they won't get much more time, unfortunately.

After maybe a week, short description on what's been happening and all, they'll get tired and their family will gather for one last goodbye as sad as it is. Said pony will feel more and more sleepy, then say they have to take a nap and ask for the family to be there when they wake up, if they can.

So, the pony dies, thinking of inplying that by a heart-monitor and the family gets sad.

The next scene/chaper however, the dead pony wakes up in their bed, feeling better than they've done in years. After being dissapointed that their family isn't there, they soon notice a light out in the hallway. As the pony feels better, they decide to check what it is out of curriosity and thus exit the room.

They then find out that the light, is comming from a blury, white and slightly red creature, radiating a comforting warmth as it seemingly is gliding closer.

As this creature then reaches the dead pony, a soft motherly voice whispers "Welcome home, my subject" and gently embraces the pony, which vission is binded by the light before they black out.

Next thing the dead pony knows, they wake up on a great grassfield, light headache but still better than ever. After looking and wandering around, they find a pond where they take a drink, then noticing that they're once again young for an unknown reason.

And as for the finishing sceene, they hear a well familiar voice behind them. And as they turn around they find their since long dead mate, as young as they were on their wedding and smiling at them. End.

Excuse me for the rambling, I'm not good at explaining things. If this is good, I'm confused.

So, is this something you can believe? That there might be another ruler of a higher power? Thank you for reading, and have a nice morning/day/night ^^