Night guards of equestria

I have the first chapter done, but I don`t know if I should publish it.
The content is bleh, and no matter what I do, it just seems meh.

So... The next chapter of Purple Tears is being done.
Slowly, but still.
It is.
Yep.

Comments

[The A I]

hm... a meh story you say? well, good luck with it my friend!

[Doukzor]

3356053 thanks!~

[The A I]

3356206

[One of the Crowd]

As long as some version of me in it; it will be amazing! *light shines behind me*

[Doukzor]

3356352 ...
You summoned the light!!!

[One of the Crowd]

3356396 No that's just Phil showing off his new flashlight. Say hi Phil.

Phil: Hello!

[Doukzor]

3356436 THE FLASHLIGHT HATH SPOKEN!!!!
Luna what are you doing here?!
I UH.... I WAS...
get out!
BUT I WAS MAKING A SANDWICH!!!
I don`t care! There aren`t any sandwiches here!
...OH.

[One of the Crowd]

3356450 Actually I have a sandwich.

[Doukzor]

3356569 Good, Luna go to him!
WE HATH NEED YOUR SANDWICH, DEAR SIR!!!
well now she`s outta my hair
BUT WE WERE NOT IN THOU HAIR. WE WERE IN YOUR MIN-
OWWWWWwwwww....

[One of the Crowd]

3356749 MY SANDWICH! LUNA, GIVE IT BACK!

[Doukzor]

3356766 NEVER!!!!
wait... You put mustard on this?!
Gah, it`s all yours.

[One of the Crowd]

3356947 Mustard? PHIL, DID YOU PUT MUSTARD ON MY SANDWICH!

Phil: eeyup

[Doukzor]

3357363 whelp, I suppose no ponies gonna eat that sandwich, so....