Concerns with Memory Lock · 7:37am Aug 29th, 2015
Arguably the better of the two stories I have posted here, Memory Lock is my own personal brain child. The story has been thought out on countless notebook paper, and copious amounts of crumpled notes sitting in a recycling center somewhere. However, no matter how much I love this project, I am not happy with it. It is poor quality. An amateurish piece of jumbled words and sentences. The grammar is bad, things are often repeated, and it is overall cringe worthy. This is why I have just made the decision to stop Memory Lock. I will no longer be working on the next chapter. However, I plan on doing a complete rewrite of the entire story so far. with the groundwork already set, I will do the one thing I couldn't get any other person to do. Edit. 
That's right, none of these chapters have been extensively edited before release (that's probably why it sucks so much.) Anyways, aside from editing, I plan on defining all of the character's personalities. A lot of work, I know. That's why I need help. If anyone reading this could read over what has been written so far in Memory Lock, and give me ideas on what I should be looking for, avoiding, and any tips and corrections, it would be greatly appreciated.
And with that, I am putting Memory Lock back on hiatus until I am once again satisfied with it.
Thanks for the support,
Arched Lightning
