I understand my writing is sub par, that the spelling and grammar issues cause a lot of problems for people.
I apologise, I am really trying my very hardest, I can't do better then I am already.
So please, if you do thumbs down at least leave a little note why, I don't mind down votes for grammar and spelling issues but it's really disheartening to get with no explanation.
So up next, I don't know what it's called but it's a slightly more serious look at an alternative leapling day, Magical Pegasus, Flying Earth Ponies and Normal Unicorns plus a terrible threat growing in darkness beyone Equestria!