I'm pulling a Lucas

Hey guys, Grann here. As you have read in the title, I decided to pull a George Lucas and re-write the first three chapters of Our Love is Iron. Now while I am a shining golden god of the written word, I admit that I did rush the first chapters due to being so excited, but now I think I can be really proud of my work.
Now don't worry, unlike Lucas, I didn't do anything as heinous as putting Jar Jar in Return of the Jedi, but I did add a few more lines to try and make the characters more like they were originally intended by their creators.
As for the next chapter, it will be coming out soon. and as a little preview, it will involve Warhawk meeting the rest of the Sirens and the return of a classic character in the PomE universe.

Grann out.

Comments

[Jasmine Tea]

like what, Grogar? Tirek? King Charlatan