I proved my namesake in a duel of honour. The crayon never stood a chance.
Even newer cover art, still titled 'Raise the Moon'!
New Cover Art, 'Raise the Moon'!
"Don't look down," I whispered. "Just look at me."
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I want the next chapter even more now.
Nice picture, really cute. Can't wait to read more.
I thought Luna was still in disguise during the moon thing.
wow... i like this version of spike, could so see this as his canon self
3329725 See the second pic. :D
3329761 I thought she had a horn in that second one. I guess I was wrong.
Awww...
Nice artwork there, that's just awesome. I really can't wait to see where this story goes. I just want to say that it's damn near perfect, I love 99.9% of it. The only thing that I don't like about the story is a mere quibble, and that is Spike's pet name for Luna, Ticky-tock or whatever. The action you describe as she does it is cute and I love it. Him actually calling her that falls out of the realm of sweet and instead becomes more saccharine, forcefully and artificially too sweet. It's already in the story so you can't change it, but yeah just my opinion though.
Wait o.o why is it S1 Luna? I know the hair flowy thing is for show and she would be smaller in disguised form....but shouldn't regular Luna be cannon size.
.....then again I'm no doubt looking far to deep into what should just be accepted as a very cute duo of pics xD