Proofreading again =P

So I started proofreading an awesome story not so long ago. It's a dark TwiDash romance with an awesome story line! ^_^
By "dark" I don't mean bloody or gory... it just deals with creepy and morally questionable themes.
Here is a link to the story: Then Tomorrow Came by PonyAmorous.
I'm in the TwiDash team, tell me what you think if you ever give it a try! =)

If you enjoyed the story, I also recommend reading this one afterwards (obviously after you read the sequel to the first one): Unwell by HazamaBrony. It is not as good as the first one but they sort of deal with a similar premise and compliment each other in a "what if" sort of way.

P.S. Now I've officially proofread or edited 3 stories, yay! =)