Regarding Natural 20s

For the next chapter of Learning to Master the Art of the Dungeon I'm going to be taking a different approach to combat, one that doesn't show the players rolls. As such, I will continue the Natural 20's (and Natural 1's count) in the Authour's Comments. After having a few people look at the latest chapter, feedback was that after a while the player perspective that I used for the Archery Trial became somewhat repetitive. As such I'm hoping the new approach to combat will be a bit more engaging and exciting.

Lastly, I forgot to mention this but, comments and constructive criticisms about my story are totally welcomed and encouraged. I'm always looking to improve my writing skills.