Story Review! · 1:08pm Aug 9th, 2015
What I first thought: Cool, a story about people turning into ponies!
What it's about: Some very stupid people in Chicago somehow bend reality and people start turning slowly into ponies.
Long review: Awesome story, little to no grammar errors. I just think that 'downloading a episode of MLP while testing a thing that goes faster than light A.K.A “Particle accelerator and Light Slower Downer Thing”' makes no sense. I can believe it if they were trying to open a gateway to a alternate dimension, but this machine would do not much. I like the overall story, plus gender-bending. I find it funny when a character becomes the opposite gender, why? 'Cause all the shenanigans that happens! Don't forget in teen or mature fics it can mean the character (that used to be a guy) getting pregnant and having to deal with that, which can be sad though.
Rating: 9/10 (Awesome!)
