Question. · 2:18am Aug 9th, 2015
I was reviewing the first chapter and saw that Sunset moving in with Plushy makes no flipping sense whatsoever.
I have an alternate version of chapter one, where Sunny doesn't move in with Plushy. It doesn't effect the storyline significantly but it would close some serious plotholes that would appear.
Now, I can't decide. Should I leave it alone and you all just ignore the crazy plotholes that will appear or switch the first chapter so it avoids any plotholes?
Lemme know!
Plushy out.
Put too many plotholes in your story and it's gonna sink. The last thing you want is characters acting a certain way just for the sake of the plot. You need to shape the plot to your characters, not the other way around.
And it's affect the storyline. not effect.
3307119
That's good advice. Thank you!
3307194 You're welcome. Just be careful with the whole OC thing, okay?
3307256
I will.