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Doukzor


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Aug
8th
2015

Purple Tears 2 · 1:13am Aug 8th, 2015

I`m going to start Purple Tears 2 soon...

Um, I would like to add videos to the story if possible (music) so I thought of maybe going to the EQG world during Rainbow Rocks. (foxy`s freaking hot in anime human form)
ahem, that being said, i`d like ideas for when I start.

If i stay in Equestria, I could do a sort of music concert. (I mean, what happens in the EQG world, happens in Equestria, right?)

I would just like some ideas for when I start it. You can suggest characters, but I already have Foxy planned out (of course).
So, Marsara... Any ideas? Any... Song ideas? I will do fnaf noticed at one point, for sure.

But as I said, I would like ANY ideas. That could be human, pony, music, blah, more blahs, blah blah...

I`m ready to start it... um, but I won`t until I get a few votes... Heh, so, please suggest stuff!:twilightsmile:

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(I mean, what happens in the EQG world, happens in Equestria, right?)

well not necessarily.. I mean, Canterlot is a country in one and a high school in another
I don't think there was equivalent music concert in Equestria.. .3.;
Actually thinking about it having a Freddy Fazbear's Pizza in both world's is staggeringly low xD

oh oh if there is a Freddy Fazbear's Pizza in Equestria.. then what about a band named Freddy Fazbear? it's smaller and fits the "reduction theory" and your music concert needs also kills off the plot point of a second set of murders on the EG side >w<

I would like to ask, is String Play AKA Travis, from the FNAF universe of a completely different universe? and if so, would being redeemed allowed the original 6 children to "balloon" their way to Equestria to save their Equestrian counter parts?.. ( you know this seems more like PM material but lets keep going xD ) I mean shouldn't all the children gotten a new bodies? but I understand why you didn't so
We saw acknowledgment of their spirits in the animatronics already, what happened to them when the foals were put animatronics? Did they become one? give them a power boost to overwrite their programing and be more independent?
Shouldn't String Play still be "alive" because Present Gift is technically not the same pony as him and took the spot of the puppet of this universe, leaving String Play able to be Interactive, solid and breathing as a Foal dark magic user? << ( I love this idea of him running around like that )
Now that hes in this state of ghostly-ness <<(which I think it would be cool if he do stuff kinda like Sombra, turning smoke and solidifying) does String Play follow Twilight around, messing with her things and such? Following her through the mirror to EG and back?
With String Play and Present Gift in the same universe does this mean twice the dark magic power?
.. wouldn't of Vincent's name have been Spring Trap from the beginning? since "equestrian names" and would've gotten confused about his "FNAF-Human" name?
(sorry that I'm doing it again, but it keeps me up at night :twilightoops: and pacing through the day :facehoof: )

Luna and Marionette do a duet of:

GF sings:

Other song ideas:

3303670 that... a lot of info to take in 3 minutes after waking up.
Um, i`ll get back to the rest, but in truth, String Play is practically on limbo. Or in other words, he`s dead, yet... Alive.
Um, in other other words, he isn`t completely dead. But he isn`t necessarily alive, completely...

I guess he could be a poltergeist if he wanted.

And, eh, I just had Vincent change his name so it fit the Spring Bonnie suit, therefore making it, "Springtrap".
Though since he changed it, his birth name is Vincent, but is now going to be called Springtrap from now on by the children, if that makes sense in any way.:twilightsheepish:

I`ll get to the rest of the info later, I need to wake up first

So... should I do a humanized for this, or stay with equines?

That`s my biggest question.

If I can get an idea of how the story is I can give you some names for the story.

3304569 that`s the thing. I don`t know if it should be a human or equine fic.
I`m starting out in Equestria, but then... human or pony?

At least, that`s my biggest question:twilightsheepish:

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equines of course :3c
otherwise it will be like most other FNAF fics :ajbemused:

the colt String Play is what sold me on the story

also I don't think the foals should loose their names I do think Crimson and String Play's friendship is quite cute :3c

k. That is so far

Equine- 1
Human- 0

3304831 Until someone votes for human---:trollestia:

3304843

*shake hoof* TT-TT

SOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooooo.....
Votes?
Equine- 1
Human- xxx

We need votes! Or not, but i`m waiting about two or three days until I start Purple Tears 2 so...:twilightsmile:

3304924

great that means you can continue answering your questions :twilightsmile:

I vote equine!
It makes it harder for me to imagine the fic in my head as I read it if it's humanized or anthro.

I have a feeling this is gonna be an equine story~:raritywink:

wouldn't twilight sparkle be able to feel the dark magic wafting off the animatronics?, wouldn't she inform Celestia of the murders?, what would Celestia or Luna do about this?, would Cadence be able to help?

3307635 eh, um...
Right...
Um...
um...
I...
Eh...

She can`t sense the magic, because it`s too strong...?
And here`s her 'thing' for not telling the princesses.
String Play told her he was going to stop the murders, and (I hope) that he was already dead. Tie that together, you have... TIME TRAVEL!!!!
So, she respected that nothing could`ve been done anyways, and that it was only right to- after the deaths- let String Play do what he could, which was give life to the dead children.

I just made a cheesy cover-up in 20 seconds:facehoof:

3307684

but this is equestria, I think murder is a very serious offense, wouldn't Celestia find out about it anyway, especially with reports of massive amounts of magic being used?

I don't believe that she would write it off as a "Lesson Zero" and I'm sure that she would be depressed, spike would notify Celestia without her permission because hes worried about twilight~ :pinkiecrazy:

3307720 You, dear, have found my most magical plot hole ever.

And I don`t think I can cover it up~

3307805 if you have to use the phrase cover up for your story :P it means you may need to go back and go over your story again, expand some things, rewrite some parts, ask questions! ^^
thats what I'm doing, and frankly I don't think Purple Tears is done yet, but I'd rather you make the next one, and then go over both again with a fine brush with our help and an editor to clear up all the plot holes you've made :pinkiehappy:

3307865 True. And I probably will, but I wouldn`t be able to cover up this plot hole without changing the whole story...:applejackunsure:

3307936

yikes sorry about that x3

3308010 Oh that`s okay, it isn`t your fault, I just never thought about that big problem in my story... Maybe I`ll include Celestia in the next one where she got the letter.
Or something.

I wanted to get out ONE teaser for the story... Yeah.

Even if it isn`t very hyped, this one teaser sets the time.

Five years later, he has awakened...

votes are final and closed! This is a equine story winning at 2-0~

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