Gut Instinct Updated · 5:19pm Jul 27th, 2015
Added chapter "Starlight" to Gut instinct.
So far, Cheerilee's returned home after a long (and terrible) day of watching the foals on a field trip... coming back one foal shy and with much uncertainty as to whether or not she'll keep her job. After a day like that, it only makes sense it can't get any worse, right? .... right?
This one underwent a lot of editing, a few versions, and a number of proof readers. Hopefully next update won't take so long. This is the point in the story where some cards are shown and a decision or two has to be made as to what direction the story takes. It's fun, but this point always makes me a bit uneasy as a writer, or a reader if the story starts losing steam.
Peace out everypony