Finally finished the first chapter of Untended Wounds

Well I started work on untended wounds in January but didn't retouch it until June 20th where I finally finished the chapter out. It takes me getting a line stuck in my head that a character would say and waking up with the right attitude in order to be able to write myself a story. That is a cohesive story, I can see pacing issues but I have edited the first chapter enough to fit my liking so I might as well leave it as is. I used to have another fic on here which gave me cancer just looking at it.

That fic is Ballad of the Righteous Stead, I started writing that at a time where I was an innocent baby brony, not keen to the true horrors which molded me later down the road. I even had christian symbolism in that fic that I only actually finished one chapter of, glad I didn't continue. The chapters I did at least try on were so bad that it made me wonder why it didn't appear on a viral video of the worst fics on the internet. But hopefully my new one isn't bad considering the long ass time it took me to do something with it.

I have a shit ton of plans for it and the only thing is that I have to choose avenues to go with the story which can be a painful choice to make. One wrong move and you will be scrutinized, the scrutiny is already intense for a fanfiction writer and the scrutiny for a bad fic writer is immense. I don't go to fanfiction.net for a reason, I only read fics which friends that I know have good taste recommend to me. OK except for the two 3 fics I read without recommendations Vinyl and Octavia University Days, Fallout Equestria, and Project Horizons. Those are different stories as save for the first they all were talked about and chanted when I was looking around, university days was something I found one night and listened to all but the last chapter which hadn't been released yet in one night. Damn you cherax destructor and your beautiful song.

Well that is a bit of a ramble but that is the style in which I enjoy to talk to people, I don't nessecarily enjoy when a person rambles on but I myself simply connect Ideas.

The point of this blog is to illustrate that if you happened to be out of the 100 people that viewed my first fic I'm sorry for the badness, I have improved at least at a nanoscopic level so please let me demonstrate to you my at least mediocre prowess with a story about ponies and the apocalypse, even though it has been done to death. But hey just because it is a bit cliche doesn't mean it can't still bring a laugh, look at 80's B movies, fucking hilarious; and the nostalgia critics review of Demolition Man with the joke about Sylvester Stallone and Wesley Snipes having a game of who can yell penis louder. I'm immature at least in thinking of celebrities playing a immature middle school game. But hey that's life for ya, you can be 69 and still laugh at your age or be 42 and believe you are the meaning of life the universe and everything (if you're a nerd and watch/read hitchhikers guide to the galaxy)

And this is why we can't have nice things, especially when you begin a paragraph with "and". This is why people will all hate the new fic (except I don't do that to my knowledge) let this new fic be a humble representation of my fagotry as the whole of the internet will now view me as the horsefucker I am (and this is gonna get me banned from this site, just watch. Not the fic cuz it has no talk of sex, but this blogpost and my 4chan upbringing for the past year, though I haven't been to 4chan in a long time the group I talk with was all regected by 4chan because they had the uncanny ability to insight rage into the hearts of passifistic stress balls. Also this is the longest fucking thought that hasn't been stated on the internet, time to turn in my keyboard and move to amish country people are gonna hate me.)