Rewriting

With some experience under my metaphorical belt. I'm going to rewrite my favorite project. The main issue with FOE:NS is that I am (less now) a in-experienced writer. I didn't proof read very well. My plot suffered severe changes due to it not making sense. It was a sinking ship. Each revision and change I made was a piece of duck tape over a plot hole. So with this in mind. I'm going to rewrite it. To top it all off, I knew where I was going with it but didn't know how. Like a map with out a legend to read it.

Suggestions would be lovely.