Fox reviews Two Apples and a Dragoness by Brony kaiju soldier · 1:26pm Jun 2nd, 2015
Yup clop, lets get started Some Sexy Fun on a Hot Day is the name of this chapter, it's the only chapter. So the story is about aged up gender swapped Big Mac (Macareina), Applejack, who's name is still the same, nice consistency here, and of course Spike (Barb). On to the review, now the tags are all true, it's as advertised which is good I don't want surprise BDSM in my clop! The start of the story was actually pretty good, it doesn't make sense though I thought Apple could kiss er I meant kick Elusive's ass, and the whole Barb coming on to Applejack just because he went to "Talk" to Elusive is a little forced, why even have that first scene? It makes gender swapped Rarity an asshole, who if he only cleaned up his shop maybe wouldn't have had an issue with Barb? Also thanks for not explaining why Applejack sleeps with his older sister, she seems to have a very good sense of what to wear while doing farm work:
tight fitting blue microkini with the top half baring two small cups that covered her nipples and areolas, but let everything else on her massive bosom show; the bottom half of the bikini looked more like a thong than anything else with barely all of her nether region being covered.
Oh well it's clop I expect these things, overall I'll say that the start of the story was good though it felt rushed. The actual you know was described well enough, some of the dialog made me laugh, but if clop isn't your cup of tea or you need more substance with your clop this isn't for you. For a clop fic this long I have to give to Brony kaiju soldier for his dedication, if you like clop then give it a read unless you don't like anthropomorphic gender swapped MLP characters getting it on, or incest.
Thanks for that.
3118166 You are welcome.