"My Kingdom Of Rubble" and how I write · 10:46pm May 29th, 2015
Hello, everyone.
I'm not going to lie, after reading it over a few times, I did not enjoy how the last chapter "Through The Storm" turned out. I should also probably explain how I write, and how I am going to publish this story. I will not always read back over the chapters before I post them. I usually go with whatever I've conjured up in my head, then put fingers to keyboard. If any of you are rightfully upset about this, I apologize. I may take chapters down without any warning, rework them, then publish them again. Any questions about the story, feel free to leave comments anywhere that I'll find them.
Again, I apologize for this being so short notice, and for the fact that this story may be taking an odd turn, or for the fact that what brought many of you to this story is simply not there anymore. I do appreciate all of the likes and favorites, and I just hope that I can deliver the story that not only is to the magnitude of what I want, but what you, the audience, rightfully deserve.
In the future, if you want to tell me that my story may flat out suck, please feel free. I may take it personal for all of five minutes, but I will try my damnedest to correct the mistakes that hold merit. By that, if I get any "Oh, how could you side with the Legion, you faggot? Dislike!", then those are obviously not worth my time.
As for the story, I'm not sure if I relayed this correctly, but yes, that is indeed Spike hiding in the caboose of the train. I feel as though I did a poor job of explaining it, but that is what happened. I will explain why he is back there in the next chapter.
I would also personally like to thank you, the audience. This being my first story on Fimfiction, I was terrified of whether or not this would be enjoyed by anyone. Such is the conundrum of being a writer, I suppose. To everyone who has liked and favorited this story, I thank you. To everyone who has commented on this story telling me your thoughts on it, I thank you also.
- The Cook
It's on the side of the positive that's for sure.
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I appreciate that. I'd hate to disappoint people on my very first story. Thank you for your kind words.
3108569 It's not a problem man. Though I do wonder how he's going to fight once he runs dry of ammunition.
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That's what the machete and knife are for. It wouldn't be the first time he's had to slice and dice the competition into bits and pieces.
3108928 And when those eventually get worn down to the point of breaking?
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You can make a weapon out of anything. Just have to be creative.
3110396 True. I think I you can do that in Fallout, I don't quite remember, it's been like a year since I've played it last.