Someone, Please? · 11:50pm May 25th, 2015
Tell me if this is as dark as the tags suggest, or if this is a fluffy noob thinking 'dark' and 'gore' means 'sad' and 'oh gee a little blood'?
I came across this but I don't wanna have a psychiatric issue if it's genuinely disturbing, whereas if it's just boo-hoo-oh-no then I might get a decent read out of it.
A tragedy fic. Solid start. But sadly story doesn't carry or use any of the buildup since what it goes into, since it focuses on hopelessness and paranoia. It has a cew cute moments. But no real dialogue due to limitations brought on from how a character ends up.
Lots of missed opportunity and limited character perspective with only two real regrets/questions. CMC related blaming and what Silver Spoon must think of her.
In the end, it really is just a "Shit just happens regardless of who you are", is what I feel comfortable seeing it as it was presented.
Beginning really made me wish it had gone more on the Silver Spoon's agenda with Diamond and Diamond's asexual or just odd tolerance for Silver's physical nature she has no interest in returning. Or would she? Could she? Would indulging Silver that one time, maybe a kiss--maybe more--lead to Diamond being able to see herself being with Silver in that way or would she continue to be grossed out or just not into fillies like that? Or even be into such acts in the first place due to age or other reasons that leads her to not find such things to her interest?
We'll never know, sadly.
Fic had 3 good moments. It's not too dark. It doesn't put too much focus on the gore beyond the first introductions of the injuries at least, I found it tasteful and not distracting beyond that and the initial reaction which introduced a bit of bile on DT's part.
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Got a decent crying out of it but I think I'm stable enough that it'll just be the cry.