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Cola_Bubble_Gum


I'm an irritating fangirl who also writes. A lot of my stuff is sad. I am sometimes overly sex-positive, so if you are sex-negative, I might have called you an elitist taint jockey. Sorry about that.

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  • 159 weeks
    is it wrong to hate and fear humanity

    my wife tells me I can bring joy to others

    my wife says my words bring comfort

    maybe I no longer believe the world is worth the risk of helping, because humans are fundamentally predatory.

    so if the world fundamentally betrays you, what would make you want to share those things with them?

    serious question. trolls and bullshit gets deleted and reported.

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  • 159 weeks
    A Few Lies Later

    (this didn't feel like a chapter proper but might end up one eventually. just getting it out so I can actually try to sleep myself :applejackconfused: )

    The memories always returned. AJ didn't figure that was ever gonna go away. How could you forget family?

    And yet, how could you survive remembering they were gone?

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  • 174 weeks
    slice of life microfic in one of my settings

    Twilight sighed. "You do amazing work, Rarity. Even when you're just setting up beach chairs for the attempted relaxation."

    "Well, darling, I can't take all the credit. The lovely little Supersprites handle so much for me, I can't help but owe them thanks."

    Twilight shrugged. "Still, it's amazing. And to think they were a pest before."

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  • 175 weeks
    well, this should be interesting

    issues? as if, this lass has a feckin' subscription.

    story ideas are terrifying and frequent lately. very unnerving.

    for me. :rainbowderp: :pinkiecrazy:

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  • 175 weeks
    clichéd as fuck

    Writer's block.

    I hate those words because they're so damned meaningless when what truly blocks you is the world.

    It's not even exactly the writer who feels like the problem. Can't write because of this person you know, or that one you knew. What if I express something some rando will gonna attack me over? Or send some fuckboy SWATter friends at me?

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May
25th
2015

Someone, Please? · 11:50pm May 25th, 2015

Tell me if this is as dark as the tags suggest, or if this is a fluffy noob thinking 'dark' and 'gore' means 'sad' and 'oh gee a little blood'?

I came across this but I don't wanna have a psychiatric issue if it's genuinely disturbing, whereas if it's just boo-hoo-oh-no then I might get a decent read out of it.

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A tragedy fic. Solid start. But sadly story doesn't carry or use any of the buildup since what it goes into, since it focuses on hopelessness and paranoia. It has a cew cute moments. But no real dialogue due to limitations brought on from how a character ends up.

Lots of missed opportunity and limited character perspective with only two real regrets/questions. CMC related blaming and what Silver Spoon must think of her.

In the end, it really is just a "Shit just happens regardless of who you are", is what I feel comfortable seeing it as it was presented.


Beginning really made me wish it had gone more on the Silver Spoon's agenda with Diamond and Diamond's asexual or just odd tolerance for Silver's physical nature she has no interest in returning. Or would she? Could she? Would indulging Silver that one time, maybe a kiss--maybe more--lead to Diamond being able to see herself being with Silver in that way or would she continue to be grossed out or just not into fillies like that? Or even be into such acts in the first place due to age or other reasons that leads her to not find such things to her interest?

We'll never know, sadly.


Fic had 3 good moments. It's not too dark. It doesn't put too much focus on the gore beyond the first introductions of the injuries at least, I found it tasteful and not distracting beyond that and the initial reaction which introduced a bit of bile on DT's part.

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Got a decent crying out of it but I think I'm stable enough that it'll just be the cry.

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