Edits to Nautilus Protocol, as well as news about the next few chapters. · 6:48pm Apr 30th, 2015
Well, since my promise to publish another chapter I've been going through the previous ones for this story to remind myself of where we've been and what we've accomplished, and I have got to say that my previous work is littered with errors and rough writing. I've made a few edits here and there, nothing major, just enough to improve readability. Also, I've cut a bit out of Jaleth's pity party in chapter III, making it more implied then explicitly stated. Still making edits though, not to mention that I'm still working on the next couple of chapters, so expect them soon!
That's awesome! The story was great before but could definitely stand improvement, and it's nice to know more will be out soon, but don't rush it if you think it would be better with another few days of editing.
Good to know everything is coming along nicely, can't wait to see what comes next.