Update · 4:44am Apr 27th, 2015
Alright, I know you've all been waiting for the next chapter of the King of Angels. But to be honest, I've lost a lot of interest in writing it. And the more I look over it the more I feel unsatisfied with it. So I'm going to ask you what you think I should do. I see two options for me.
1. Continue writing the story (the next chapter will probably come out sometime mid-May, when I'm off school)
2. Do a complete rewrite of it.
I would say to continue it as. It's a very enjoyable story.
Option 1 please.
I don't understand what else you could do. Right now its smooth, moments serve their purpose for each moment and help set up new arcs in the story. You latterly now tie in the main six alicornfication after twenty chapters. That's impressive by even modern writing standards. I literally cant wait for the next part where we see him try and convince the main six that their new appendages are worth their trouble and prove celestia wrong. It would not boed well for her to have six new alicorns to the already important three.
Still if you want to rewrite I and other readers would love to be there to give our support in what ever you decide. Its your story, make it what you want. In the end you right it and we only read, so do what you want for your self, we aren't the most important people here, it you.
Don't be so hard on yourself. You have an interesting character, a good plot, and you don't confuse your readers. I personally want you to continue but if you want to rewrite that's your right. Either, way I'm sure your story will be as incredible as ever.
You don't need to rewrite it. It's a great story.
Continue writing it!
What did you decide in the end?
1. I may be late but I've been really enjoying this so far. Seriously this story is pronably a thousand times better than you think it is.
more please!
this is a fantastic story I love the plot and Isaac this story really doesn't need a rewrite I love it the way it is and I hope you continue with it soon oh and happy new year too ya.
Continue you are an amazing writer
I guess there was a hidden third option, "do nothing" lazy bastard.
I'm curious as to what the re-write will entail.
It's been two years and you haven't picked an option yet
4542506 The guts to say what I never could.
Re-write
Continue. It's a pretty good story and I like it.
Continue.