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Although it left it, it knew that it was right, it made it down, because it didn't know what's up.

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  • 218 weeks
    You were the Chosen One!

    Alas, it was not so.

    So as many of you may have surmised, I have violently but silently passed away.

    That is to say I am dead.

    Not in the literal sense, but possibly in the literary sense.

    To make things short, I had a bit of a breakdown, a couple of other mundane life-things and a lack of time to even consider writing.

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  • 285 weeks
    Microstory X - Awkward Twilight

    It happened at a bookstore.

    "Hello," said the clerk.

    "Morning," Twilight mumbled back.

    The clerk returned a strained smile back and then went back to work.

    Twilight then realised in her half-tired state that it wasn't morning, it was the evening, the store was closed and it wasn't a bookstore, and the clerk wasn't there and she had been talking to a cardboard sign all this time.

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  • 286 weeks
    Microstory IX - The Existence

    Before Twilight could say anything, Pinkie held up her hoof.

    "Twilight, stop, before you say anything. I have to say something!"

    Silence followed.

    "What were you going to say?"

    "...I forgot."

    "Pinkie... what are you doing on my doorstep?"

    "Twilight, you have to help me with my application!"

    "What's this?" She held the documents up. "These look like job... rejections?"

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  • 316 weeks
    Micro Story VIII - The Rock

    It started with a slight clicking sound.

    Like the fingernails tapping on a tabletop.

    Click. Click. Click.

    There it sat on her desk.

    The rock.

    Eyes fixated on the inanimate object, Twilight examined it with such rigour.

    But it stood still.

    Yet still was that sound.

    Click. Click. Click.

    Then a different sound.

    Crack.

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  • 331 weeks
    Micro Story VII

    Twilight glanced out the windows at the dim backdrop of stars.

    Night time, she thought, and lazily went back to reading.

    Then she returned back to the window.

    No wait, that's space!

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Apr
26th
2015

Have Any Of Your Stories Been Approved? · 2:45am Apr 26th, 2015


Remember the elves who make your toys.

After seeing The Descendant's userpage I feel compelled to write about this. I know that not many of my blog posts get read and well, that's fine, but for the few that do stumble upon the blog posts I do, I'd like to encourage any of the new writers following me to thank any of the pre-readers that approve your stories (and to any that are rejected).

As The Descendant puts it, 'they probably have one of the hardest jobs on the site', not that any of the other jobs aren't also hard in running the site, but just bear in mind that these people are doing this free as well and in their own time. So give all the pre-readers a nod of thanks and please appreciate what they do from time to time, because think about all the stories that get approved, now roughly triple that number and add an undisclosed variable and that's how many they probably have to go through.

So once again, thank them, you can do so by clicking the little 'reply' button when your story gets approved. Also, be nice to them, they're trying to help you too if your story is lacking something. It helps your story if its properly laid out and at least bare-bones moderated :D

As always, I'm available to chat on Skype 'hackloaded'. If you want to discuss things with me or if you simply need some help with your story (bear in mind I might not have time to edit, but hey any help is good help, right?).

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Comments ( 11 )

Pre-readers are basically white blood cells, there's less of them but they're important in keeping everything running smoothly

yay science analogy :twilightblush:

3017461 And just as critical in weeding out the bad stuff in our bodies! I love analogies!

Hmmm, need to get my story improved but I haven't found any help yet. Some people say it's more like a screenplay than a novel and I need help with that. eh. haven't written a word for a week now.

Both of my stories have been approved, actually. The first is on Hiatus until I feel more confident with my writing skills, an the other is a one-shot.

3017700 Well if you PM me, I can take a look at it if you want.
3017811 That's great! Make sure you thank your pre-readers and approvers!

3017883
No pre-readers, actually. As for the approvers, good idea. They do a lot every day.

3017883 or would you mind if i poked you on Skype?

3017883 Oh and i don't add someone on skype until they say it's okay. Even if their skype name is public.

3019092 Why not? I don't mind :D

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