Just One Mistake - Chapter 3 Started! · 12:48am Jul 15th, 2012
So, I've finally started chapter 3. I'm going to give you the first paragraph, but it might not get included in the story. Once i finish the first draft I'll go back and take out things that don't quite fit in. Then it gets run through my editors. We'll see!!
Also, this story was originally going to be 3 chapters but i missed one part that i wanted to happen in the story, so it's going on to 4 chapters. I think.
Twilight stared outside her bedroom window, like she had been doing for the past five weeks. Occasionally, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie and Rarity would come visit. She just shrugged them away. Spike had given up on Twilight. It seemed unlikely that the loyal dragon would ever give up, but he spent hours trying to pull the violet unicorn out of her sadness. Eventually, he just stopped trying, as it had become useless. It always ended in one of two ways, her yelling at him or he just quietly leaving.
I don't know what the plot line will lead into, but for some reason I keep getting this idea...(Set as some time later)
Rainbow had nothing else to say to Twilight. No words could explain how hurt she felt, and not because the unicorn went back to Canterlot. She was hurt for how Twilight had betrayed her. Finally at the tree, Rainbow opened the door and took a peak inside.
"Alright Rainbow, I'm just here for the last of my...things..." Rainbow's self chanting fell off. She walked to the near by desk, to find three objects left on it. First was a note, labeled to Rainbow Dash. The next was a heart shaped locket, a picture of Twilight and herself on Hearts and Hooves day. The last object hit Rainbow the hardest. On the right edge was a small black box, a cyan hear placed on the top. Rainbow proceeded to open it, to find a bracelet, like the ones used for proposals......
Just something I thought up, what do you think?
232314 I really like that! Maybe I'll steal bits and pieces of that, if that's okay with you?
233077 Be my guest. Your story, your rules XD. That is one of the things that happen when I get really bored. I find stories, and add alternate or extended parts. I JUST CAN'T HELP MYSELF!
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Any-who, take what you wan't. It's all yours.
233253 Thanks!
233320 No prob!