[4:33:27 PM] Solocats: Aight, let me just relocate to my bed and laptop first then [4:33:41 PM] Solocats: I prefer doing stuff with you in bed [4:33:52 PM] Solocats: That came out wrong [4:33:55 PM] Queueduroy: You knew exactly what you were doing there. [4:34:00 PM] Queueduroy: Don't deny it, you slut. [4:34:03 PM] Queueduroy: : ^ D
So for a while now something's been bugging me about how you fuckers write, and I've been guilty of it, too. I call it the "Business Factory School of Writing" after Vincent Adultman from Bojack Horseman. Don't know what I'm talking about? Then shame on you, and take a gander:
People will only read the first two sentences of your description unless they're damn good sentences, so make sure they're damn good sentences. Explaining the fine details of your story will be boring because walls of text are shit and there won't be any context; your story description is not an appropriate place to dump exposition. Explain in broad, punchy terms what people will find in your
3426429 I'm always around but I've been focusing mostly on my real life social life and it seems to be working for me, considering I got myself a gf this morning Pretty good pick me up considering I've been taking antidepressant medication for 2 weeks now so really a lot of shit has been going on in my life, and it's been real distracting
Snips is gross.
Babs is a qt.
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Snips just has some baby fat. He'll be real big and strong soon.
How does she use scissors with hooves
2995801 Maaaaaagiiic.
2995801 Hey, man, what's up? I haven't seen you around in weeks.
3426429 I'm always around
but I've been focusing mostly on my real life social life
and it seems to be working for me, considering I got myself a gf this morning
Pretty good pick me up considering I've been taking antidepressant medication for 2 weeks now
so really a lot of shit has been going on in my life, and it's been real distracting
3426493 Well, it's good to see you again just the same.
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