Retrying A fanfic

So, I'm rewriting The one who Escaped, but now its called The Secret of a Rainbow, I changed the plot and idea completley, I'm making it longer, etc, etc. After I got 30 likes on my last fanfic, A second Chance, And then I got 3 likes and the same amount of dislikes on The one who escaped, I know I could do A LOT better. This may take awhile, since this one might be pretty long. But it will be worth it. I think it will take a couple weeks at least.
Reasons:
1. Its gonna be long
2. Sometimes I don't feel like writing.
3. I only write when I have inspiration.

So, please wait for another fanfic from AppleStar. :)

Comments

[BoundSoul]

That's the spirit.

[Little Brave Heart]

231379 yeah, I've done it once before. I kinda like doing it. LAWL

[BoundSoul]

232185
I kinda like stalking you without reason and replying under everything you do.

[Little Brave Heart]

232190 yeah.....thats not creepie or anything.... lol

[BoundSoul]

232206

Hey. I have written some poetry today. Interested?

[Little Brave Heart]

232208 I'm derpy hooves! and sure,

[BoundSoul]

232211
Not in the slightest

The life as a ruler of chaos isn't nice.
Not in the slightest.
Do you think I have might?
Not in the slightest.
Do you think I have fun?
Not in the slightest.

When I watched into the faces of my parents,
I saw fear.
When I watched into the faces of my friends,
I saw fear.
When I watch in the faces of the little subjects of mine,
I see fear.

Sometimes I stand up from my throne.
To leave.
Sometimes I lift myself in the air.
To leave.
Today I close my eyes.
To leave.

(I could post way more, but that should be enough for now)

[BoundSoul]

232211
Do you like it?

[Little Brave Heart]

232229 yes, very much! AppleStar approves

[BoundSoul]

232233
Glad to hear that, even if I suck in my opinion.

[Little Brave Heart]

232235 you don't suck at ALL, you'r a lot better than me

[BoundSoul]

232381
..........
what should not at all mean?....
Hey thanks for the compliment. Do you make poetry sometimes?