Schmerz: Looking for an editor

A number of you asked for it, and it's on its way very soon.
The newest chapters for Schmerz are ready (up through chapter 4), and I need an editor or two skilled in the English language.

Find my recruiting thread and a couple more details in the Rape group here:
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/197816/rape/thread/169070/looking-for-an-editor-humanized-4yearold

Comments

[Biker_Dash]

And why didn't you ask? lol
If you wish, I can offer you job references . (CvBrony, Swift Blaze, Spacecowboy, ect.)

[Flutterpony]

I'm very happy with my usual editor, but I don't hold any expectations that he or my usual readers will want to devote time to polishing this particular story. Did you take a look at the linked thread and see the length, etc.?

[Cheesey Burger]

Although I am English, I do lack any real grasp on the correct English grammer and sentence structure.

I do hope you will find someone soon though. There are many out there that did want to see your story continued, including me, so I'm sure one will be qualified to take on an editorial role.

[Flutterpony]

2982368 It's coming along alright so far. Should be finished with chapter 4 tonight.

[Lululu]

I'll do it if you're still looking. I am highly pedantic as an editor, and will nail all of the little things, as my previous victims clients will attest.

[Flutterpony]

2984768 Your comments are very welcome if you'd like to read it on EPFA now that it's published there. There shouldn't be any more grammatical errors, but I'm very interested to know how believably the characters come across.

[GammaXai]

I am definitely going to keep reading and if there is still a need I would be willing to proofread and I think I am sufficiently fluent in English as while I am not a writer myself I have English as my first language.

What I have read so far seemed free of errors and was believable enough that I don't think anything jumped out at me as wrong but I may have missed stuff in the later parts as I had to keep hiding the tab. On that last note I'm not sure how good I would be in a time crunch as considering the subject matter it is now more obvious to me how important it would be to wait for a suitable time and place to read in a single sitting.

[Flutterpony]

3046031 Yeah, it's pretty graphic. I'm lucky I get lots of free time alone to write. Thanks for volunteering. I've been struggling with other projects lately, but I'd like to return to Schmerz for a couple more chapters somewhere down the road. I imagine the mental stuff might start to peter out now that I've already established the characters' mental patterns. There's still some exploration I'd like to do, like what Velvet and Sparkle might think or feel around their other immediate family members now, and how Velvet might begin to spiral. I also have no lack of ideas for future sexual scenarios between mother and daughter.