Sticky Wickets

One of my hang ups working on OUTWaste has been my fear that my character will come out sounding like Silver storm from FoE: Heroes. While the pony with no name has a completley different attitude and approach to how she handles a situation, I worry that I'll still be influenced by one of my favorite FoE Side Stories.

Take this line here I just typed up for chapter five:
'I’d spent the last few hours trying to avoid a staring contest with a goat as I waited for the bar to empty.'

Does that sound like a Silver-ism, or am I just overthinking it?

-Sparkus