As I read in my comments it seems my spelling is way of. I plan to fix this in the future. I'm gonna have my friend and a couple of others read it before I put another one up.. Some say the concept is unoriginal. Well that maybe so but the fics I have read are not told. I have only read My Little Dashie Cupcakes Silent Ponyville The Promises we keep The Hero of time in Equestria And Human.
To any who are following me I posted my first story. Technically my 2nd but the one I started was no good. My thanks to Danny J for helping me on that. Just waiting for the mods to look at it now.