"One Simple Choice" Chapter One Rewrite Up

One Simple Choice

Well, even though chapter one was already uploaded, my editor recommended rewriting chapter one to better set up the rest of the story. Trust me when I say the rewrite is WAY better and definitely more poignant than the first version I had.

So please, check out the rewritten chapter one. Most of the beginning is the same, but I almost completely rewrote the Fluttershy scene. I also cut a big chunk of the end of this chapter to move to chapter two.

So, I hope you enjoy! And I'm getting better at planning, but if you happen to have any ideas for this fic, please do not hesitate to let me know. Thanks!