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Heavyhauler75622


Trying to get these wonderful ideas out of my head and down for everyone to read...

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  • 177 weeks
    It finally happened...

    Last night, I finally attracted my first imbecile...

    And applied my first block, after YEARS of being here.

    I have discovered, to my amazement, that there are individuals here who write the most fulsome trash known to man; then spend their other waking moments playing "Kelsey Grammar N*zi" upon other writers, amongst other literary abuses...

    Now.

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  • 368 weeks
    Starlight Glimmer...

    Hey, peeps!

    Time for a little controversy...

    Glimglam...

    Love her or hate her, Starlight Glimmer is the flava of the year in S7. The Hasbro Mary Sue, some say...others, the emotionally damaged creature reaching for acceptance...

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    0 comments · 460 views
  • 385 weeks
    Well, it's been out a day...

    Hi, Everyone!

    Well, it's been out for a day...

    "Buckball Mania"...a different kind of story. Usually, any story, or group of stories like a montage, focuses on a pony (person), or group of.

    "Buckball" actually focuses on the game, making it a mirror for the impact it makes on our ponies lives.

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  • 385 weeks
    Buckball Mania

    It's out...

    "Buckball Mania"...

    I have absolutely no idea where to promote this story. It's full of everypony, Equestria Girls, Princesses, and three Sirens...

    Help me out here, my friends...

    Thanks,

    Crystalheart...

    PS: This is a montage of little moments, all tied together by a game...so be ready...

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  • 385 weeks
    A new story...

    Hi, everyone...

    Just uploaded to the site a new one. 10,000 words. A few edits, and I'll make it live...

    In the meantime, a few hints...

    Ponyville purple, sky blue, and white...

    Won against Appleoosa red...

    Sure were a LOT of ponies in the stands...

    Soooo...MAYBE it's time for Equestria to have a professional sports team...

    And how they react to it...

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Mar
9th
2015

Next up... · 9:09pm Mar 9th, 2015

Writing can be a challenge...
When you sit down and try to come up with ideas, there's a process involved; said process usually being, "No, no, uh-uh, nope, certainly not, absolutely not, you gotta be kidding, anon, anon, ad infinitum..."

Then there's the Derpy lightning times...CRACK! BOOM!

I tend toward visual. Sophiecabra did it with "Two Mares Walk Into a Bar..." The picture accompanying the story was the inspiration for it. Celestia in her crown and raiment, acting like the typical barfly, cradling a cider mug as she lectures Twilight, who has that "Can I be anyplace but here?" look on her face.
"On Writing", same thing.
"Relaxing on a Saturday Night", ditto.

And now I wish I had saved the one I saw this morning, because it caused an entire outline...
Rarity is alone in a field. Sad and crying. Spike walks up to her, hands her a flower. She smiles, hugs him warmly.

Take that simple, warm, loving moment...and stretch it over eighty years or so...

And this one will tear your heart from your chest, and rip it to shreds in front of you...

Let you know when I put it up. Stay tuned.

Crystalheart

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Comments ( 4 )

Honestly i don't really like Sparity Fics, I mean it feels like spike only likes rarity because she is the prettiest, IE the shiniest gem in the pile, and any other reasons he gives for liking her fall flat and just sound like excuses. If i had to pick my favorite ship for Spike, it would probably be a background pony, like Dinky or even CarrotTop. Simply because it allows spike to develop his character past his base needs and desires.

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It depends...
Keep Spike a baby dragon with crushes, and then it's cute...
Make it a love story over seventy or eighty years, and it changes unbelievably...epically, you might say...

Crystalheart

2865078 Well good luck to you friend, i've read quite a few of those kinds of sparity fics, and so far none of them have wowed me. They all end up feeling very cliche and drawn out, with very predictable endings.

Still working on Spike/Rarity... not quite there yet. Almost...
In the meantime...I put one out. A one shot. S5, Ep1&2. Spoilers. Watch the episode first, then read it...
"The End of Starlight Glimmer"
Seriously. Watch the episode first.

Crystalheart

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