Improvements

So I submitted my story to EqD and received an email this morning. Here are the contents:

Thank you for the submission, but we are not currently interested in posting this story. While this is certainly an original concept, you need an editor to help you look this over. There are plenty of awkward phrasings, grammar errors, and generally poor stylistic choices which impede the reader's ability to enjoy the story itself.

I recommend posting in one of the many review threads on ponychan's /fic/ board. Just make sure you read the sticky at the top before doing anything else.

Hope to hear back from you once this has been edited sufficiently.

So as you read, I need it to be thoroughly edited. Besides that, it sounds like they enjoyed my story. I was never any good at grammar. 10 years of schooling and only this past year I felt I learned anything of use. That's probably because I found my passion for writing. So yeah, I sent a message to an editor, and if he is up for it, should be editing it. =D

From what it sounds like, EqD will post my story once it has been edited.

For the Lunar Republic - Paraturtle

Comments

[Darkswirl]

Good luck getting on the site...
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[Paraturtle]

I don't actually go on it frequently, mainly because of the stories I've heard from fellow roleplayers, but I need to advertise my story.
Their email seemed promising though, so Hopefully it will work out.

[Poise]

You are always free to send me the contents. As it happens, I have a good eye for grammar errors and stuff like that.

~Echo