I Dream to Fly :Update Six: + Second Proofreader + Me being lazy/sick

So, many people may have noticed that the lack in chapters has been a bit... than it normally is. This may be because of three things, in fact, it is because of these three things. My proofreader (DuskAndDawn) has been pretty busy, with music making and other specific stuff that I lack to notice. So him having the time to correct my mistakes was scarce. The chapters may be a little longer to come due to me having a new proofreader, there for, having the chapter go through multiple proofreaders. My new proofreader is NATOstrike, whom which has done an amazing job in editing ALL of the chapters to make them better, giving them better grammar and also making them a lot more understandable and descriptive. If you wanted, you could re-read the chapters to get a better feel of the story and also a more enjoyable experience in the story. Nothing big has changed in the storyline, just some tweaks to have it run better in the readers head. So, that just about covers it. Here are your small snip from the new chapter, which will be out tonight (Promise!)

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She shook her flank slightly to get a better grip on the wood stairs, moving her hooves ever so slightly. After getting a good, solid footing she held her breath, ready to face whatever was inside her bedroom. She sprang into the bedroom and used her horn to illuminate the small room. Her room was now bathed in a bright white light, but after a fast inspection it appeared there was nopony in the room. Twilight made a second, more thorough search with her eyes. She looked closely at the bed and noticed that there was obviously something under the covers. The blanket was rising and falling with each breath of the intruder.

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With that said, I hope you like the new chapter as all three of us put a lot of work into this chapter, not to forget every other chapter in the story (Thanks to both DuskAndDawn and NATOstrike again) So, moving on to something unrelated to the story... kinda.

I've been very, very sick recently, due to a Vitamin C overdose. The overdose rendered me extremely weak, quite nauseous, in a great deal of pain and has also had my heart failing quite a lot. This overdose was allot more dangerous than it would have seemed, as I have a phobia of pain (Agliophobia) I'm never used to so much pain, so my body was rendered next to useless in fighting off the overdose. It got to a point where my heart was failing, pain in my stomach, throat, lungs and especially the kidneys. The pain for me was unbearable, my phobia caused me to be in agony almost every time pain struck. The only person who I listened to was my girlfriend (MrsDynasty) whom tried her best to help me as much as possible in this situation, even if it meant watching over me while I slept at night. I love her so much and the fact that she would do that for me makes me so happy. I can't thank her enough for being in a skype call each and every day, for as long as the call lasted. One of the calls was 26 hours long.

I'm on a very, very slow road to recovery, at max, it should take me another week to get all of my strengths back.

~~~ MrDynasty

(ONE last thing, okay? I'm going to be working on a comic for my tumblr roleplay blog AskGamerTwilight. I need as much support as I can get, so if you could, visit the blog and help me through this illness while I work on this comic for the blog. I'm going to try my best to get the comic out when I can.)