Feb
14th
2015
So on a lighter note · 5:51am Feb 14th, 2015
Magic and Steel, during my writing of the main Baen canon, I've had various ideas and yes there will be musical bits. So I thought, if Baen could sing a love song to Sunset, honestly I can imagine him singing this in his voice while playing acoustic. At this point though, his feelings for her are there, but he's lightly confused. It starts as a song for Coco, but Sunset enters his mind.
What do you think? Have any better ones in mind?
Nigga, are you trying to write a love triangle!? A MUSICAL LOVE TRIANGLE!?
Take my advice, and get back to focusing on the stuff you know how to write rather than spread yourself so thin that you're one micrometer away from becoming a completely permeable barrier.
No. Bad Cryptic. I understand you're going for something "daring" for your side story, but a love triangle? Really? Dude, drop the idea. Hell, put the side story on hold entirely, and finish your main project.
On another note, please, don't just take inspiration upon the latest thing that catches your interest. If it's truly inspirational and worth while, it'll stick around with you long after you've first seen it.
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Uh no, it's not. They've broken up at this point, it's more of one of those songs one sings when they think no one is listening. Just to feels vent.