Editing and Rewriting

The first few Chapters of Scattered Seeds have been proven to be unsatisfactory. Thanks to cheezesauce, I was able to understand exactly how and why they were bad. But the more I looked at them, the more I disliked them. So I decided to simply rewrite a few of them. Of course, this is going to hinder the progress of the 21st Chapter. Don't worry, the story isn't dead.