Jul
3rd
2012
Story update · 1:06am Jul 3rd, 2012
Just wanted to let you all know that chapter seven is well underway, and more than halfway through page four. Not sure how long it will take, since this is Spitfire's first big chapter to herself. I'm trying to throw in some background detail on her, and being careful about it because she seems to be the most popular amongst those commenting. There may or may not be some light clopping in it, I haven't decided yet, though I am leaning towards including it. What do you all think?
YES
Spitfire will make a epic comeback.. Can't wait
GO TwiFire
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Lunar Justice
Good to hear. Looking forward to the update. As for the clipping I guess it depends on who it involves and the extent. Regardless I'm sure it will be done well. You've yet to let your readers down yet.
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Thanks for your opinions, everyone. I was kinda worried since the clop in the last chapter didn't go over nearly as well as I thought it might. Some thought it was unnecessary and tacked on, but I had hoped that it would set the tone of intimacy a little more. Guess we'll see how this one goes. ::crosses fingers::
209647 This time it involves one of our four main characters, so I'm betting it'll go down a lot better with those who weren't as keen on the previous clop session.
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Nailed it.