Lots of things that I'm dealing with, dood. · 9:21am Jan 21st, 2015
First things first: I just reached a weird point in my reading career where I want to read about Twilight getting killed, dood. More specifically... stories where Twilight sacrifices herself to save everypony else, dood. There was a specific one where there's a golem that Luna and the Mane6 fought and it causes a Cave in and Twilight pushes AJ out of the way and get's crushed... I wanna re-read that but I can't find it, dood.
Anyways. I was distracted by writing the first chapter of the Futa-Twi prompt I'm calling ' Dandy' based on my most recent talk about Dandy-Light with Rule63 Spike being Sharon, dood.... I fucked up because I finished it and it's 800 words... gonna have to look at it again later, dood.
Half way done the TwilightXGildaXApplejack... it's gonna be slow as I'm trying to visualize Twilight and Gilda fucking AJ into a stupor, dood.
And NOW for the reason why this is tagged House Sparkle, dood!
I am STRONGLY considering giving this another chapter before it goes back into Writer's Block Hell and possibly rewriting a few chapters... such as 'The Muscle', dood. I've been reading the comments and.. yeah... Applejack should have atleast been dazed by the idea of Twilight having a dick... and I might just try and fix the whole TwiBarb thing, dood. I apologize for that.
Later though... I must rest, dood.
this is that story. your welcome!
WTF! In the story I'm writin' Twilight does something similar to what you described. Freakin' far too late to change it now...
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Really? wow, shows how good my memory is... that thing is in my favorites and I still couldn't find it... thanks, dood!
2737693 I'm sorry, dood.
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meh, it's not your fault.
Remind me as it's been a while, but what was wrong with the TwiBarb?
2737886 I finished it at 850 words but it has to be a thousand words to be submitted to the site, dood.
Oh, I thought you were talking about the situation between Twi and Barb in House Sparkle. Question withdrawn.
2737959 OH... the House Sparkle TwiBarb problem was that I handled it like a drunk, dood. Like Barb wins, Twilight groans, Barb gets a bit into it, Twilight starts to complain but Barb gets all greedy, dood.
Conflict is nothing to shy away from in a story. It builds tension and makes the characters more relateable by showing they have their own desires, dreams, hopes, etc, just like the reader.
2738021 I just re-read The Muscle, chapter. And... I am finding very little problems with that chapter all of a sudden. Sure I changed a few things, like making Twilight at least TRY to make Barb stop, but nothing much else, dood. I'll probably go through the rest of the chapters to see if I need to change things, dood.
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I'll just pitch in as a big fan of House Sparkle. I too found nothing wrong in the chapters. I don't understand anyone having issues with it.
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I resent that. I find issue with everything.
2738076 I have a few gripes with it that I am not sure I can change without rewriting a lot of the story, dood. Like I handled Barb really poorly but I'm too lazy to change her, dood.
2739445 And I accept all criticism, dood. So long as they are easy to fix... if they are too hard to fix than I'll probably won't go back to fix it and instead slowly try to write future chapters into fixing the problem and make jokes about it, dood. Like Barb and Applejack(kinda)'s characters in House Sparkle, Twilight's bitchi-ness in House Sparkle, Twilight's inability to escape the inevitable sex scenes (Mostly Misadventures but also House Sparkle) and my hypocrisy towards certain ships where TwiArmor and Spilight would be easily fixed in my view if Spike and Shining Armor became chicks... and Twilight grew a dick, everything, including the main canon of the show, needs Twilight to grow a dick, dood and I'm very tempted to rewrite every episode of the series in that format but I probably won't because that's been done to death, dood.
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Do it in lymeric form, then. Better yet: rewrite high profile fan fics with Twilight possessing a dick. Doesn't even need to have sex in it.
2739462 Dusk's Dangerous Game just got a whole lot kinkier, dood.
2739465 That's the spirit.
2739473 Speaking of spirit, expect yours to wane a bit should you decide to jump back into Oh God Why 16, dood. (The Mating Season Google.doc) Day 6 is done-ish and Day seven is proving to be a monster of a chapter... atleast 2000 words for each sex scene, dood.