"Unnamed" (Derpy and Dinky's Story) Story Update!+Break Update! · 11:32pm Jul 1st, 2012
Hey guys!
Unnamed Story Update: Ok, so, guess what! YOU GUYS GET TO HAZ PREVIEW! Yes, the derpy story i have been developing just reached 2,000 words (Finished general plot last week, finished character mapping wednesday, finished story planning two days ago, started writing today) and i wanted to provide a preview for it! I need two things though, a name, and some feedback on the preview. The preview is the first page of the story! Here it is! Remember, this is paste bin, and an unedited version, so don't focus on grammar. Just the writing and general stuff like that :p
Break Update: So, i have come to the first week of the two week break for beyond! Throughout that week, Chapter 2 was edited for errors that me nor GoldenEagle caught by starfall! Again, this won't be the norm, i was just being impatient. Chapter 3 is also going through editing right now, and will be released during the break. The prologue will also get a small face lift. Nothing TOO drastic, as it has already been edited until it pooped blood, but we ARE going for EQD, so it shall be edited further! Most of my stories won't be edited to this extent, but i really want to make a good impression the first time. Again, there may be only five or four followers, and ~20 followers, it means a lot to me that you guys love my writing and the story!
*le sexy sentence nazi*
Uhm, KENT! DIS SENTANCE NEEDZ DA REVIONZ AND SUCH!!!1!!1
*le sentence nazi provides le correction*
Derpy had once worked at a renowned Pegasus run shipping company. The whole purpose of the company was to ship items normal earth ponies couldn’t and were also responsible for shipping items out too different cities and towns.
*le me reads da sexy correction*
FIXED IN THE STORY >:@
........ I'm not lonely, just.... alone ;_;
No, i kid, just felt like speaking meme for a second :p
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lawl. Dat made me lolz.
Go check my upcoming stories, the third one down... that will make you happy :3
207064 Yay
(Not really)
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But it made me happy