A Pegasus Swing Notes · 1:05pm Jun 30th, 2012
This chapter was by far the hardest to write at first. I haven't written anything in awhile, and it felt... rushed. It got to the point where there was more happening in the chapter than there were details about them. So I cut off what I had written and focused on the portion of it that I felt was the most important.
And so was born a short chapter around 1k words. It was short, sweet, and to the point. They danced for a little bit, and then she left. I was satisfied with the chapter, to an extent. I didn't know what else to do with it. That's where Lunar Justice came in.
This man is filled with more pony knowledge that I could ever hope to know. He shared with me several ideas, all of which were implemented in the chapter as best to my abilities. And the chapter is so much richer because of it. To be blunt, he helped make it 20% cooler, and I owe him one. If you guys liked the new chapter, you should do me a favor and post a comment on his page thanking him for helping me. It would mean a lot.
Hmmm, hm hmm, hm hmm, hmmm, hmm, hm hm...
Oh. Sorry. I was humming to myself.
204368 Star Wars? No wait... Terminator? No... I can't figure it out!