Oops.

For a while, I sensed that Acceptance's writing wasn't great, but I didn't get why it happened, and now I finally figured out what went wrong.
Well, when I started writing it, it was fine, except for some grammar/spelling errors, which I found soon after I wrote them, but I wanted to edit it all in a wave. Thing is, I missed some stuff for every wave, and I didn't edit very often, so I had crazy mood changes in between, resulting in strange and awkward writing. Sorry about that! I'll try to revise in the (near?) future.