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MrAlterad


A brony living in the states that really likes Fallout.

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  • 402 weeks
    Trioverse Vs Canon Changelings

    Spike is friends with a changeling named Thorax.
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    Spoilers...

    So with that episode, a lot of new information was given on changelings:

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  • 402 weeks
    Down Time

    Sorry for the silence and lack of updates for last few weeks. A lot of things were going on, take your pick:

    -Work was extra busy.
    -My love for Pokemon was reignited.
    -Latest WoW Expansion went live.
    -Been in a minor depression. (still am)
    -Lacking motivation to work on Teal Changeling. (lacking motivation on all fronts actually)

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    1 comments · 624 views
  • 408 weeks
    Teal Changeling: One mooore thing!

    Regarding tags:

    Adventure: Chrys and company are seeing the world and growing for it, while facing adversity. While there are slice of life moments heavily sprinkled in, at its core, this is an adventure story.

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    3 comments · 583 views
  • 408 weeks
    Teal Changeling Polish: The Second Half

    There was surprising little I needed to do to the second half of the story, compared to the first. There were a lot of chapters that were fun to read all over again. I’m really proud of 14, 19, and 21. Hopefully 27 will be on the same tier of quality.

    Nothing of note was added or changed in chapters 14 through 20.

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  • 410 weeks
    Teal Changeling Polish: The First Half - New Scenes.

    I've worked over half of the story so far, which means chapters 0-13 have been looked over :twilightblush:. I've added a few things. Tweaked this and that. Fixed big derps. All changes and additions are live, though there are bound to be grammatical errors in 7-13.

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Dec
26th
2014

Gaian Polish Mark2 · 1:29pm Dec 26th, 2014

The time is nigh! On the cusp of disc three, the clock ticks as the heroes of Gaian side lick their wounds and prepare for the oncoming storm. But before they can learn the truth of Unified Fantasy, and unravel its machinations. Before they can face Kuja, and shatter his schemes. Before they can save two worlds locked on the brink-
They have to wait for me to go through the previous chapters and make everything read better! :facehoof:
That's write(:ajsmug:)! It's time for another round of polish - Gaia side. Like last time, I'll be going through all the chapters, and making the previous match the latest in terms of quality.
Or, at least try to do that.
I don't know how long it'll take, but I think it's a safe bet it'll take more than two weeks.
Hopefully, the story's cover art will be done by then. :scootangel:
If you have any suggestions, comments, criticisms you'd like to offer, feel free to leave them in the comments on this blog, or email me and I'll try to implement your suggestions.
I'd like to think that my writing's gotten better since the last round of polish, and I hope it shows.
Thanks again for reading my story, through all the ups and downs, and I hope you have a happy new year. :twilightsmile:

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Also, I'm keeping the Discord Tag for my story. He's not done with Gaia just yet.
So trust me when I say, there will be more Discord. Eventually.:twilightblush:

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