And with a vengeance as well. I'm writing on Breach, I'm writing a new story at the same time, I'm rebuilding the Brony Political Party group. Everything is going well.
...Celestia’s sun was settling below the horizon of the Everfree forest as Twilight made her way home. The forest path she silently walked was becoming more and more obscured as she continued on her way, the approaching darkness stealing her sight with every ever more careful step of her hooves...
Chapter one was a piece of shit, and it always WAS a piece of shit. Now it isn't. I went back, smoothed it out, and in the process, TRIPLED the word count for 1000 to 3000. Chapter 2 soon to be revised.
200930 Welcome. I have to say...I have no Idea how I did this. I went in with the intent on explaining more and adding some more details...and left with a few PAGES worth of new story.
Ooooh Thanks man!
200930
Welcome. I have to say...I have no Idea how I did this. I went in with the intent on explaining more and adding some more details...and left with a few PAGES worth of new story.